This is a much more complete front cover. I kept all the conventions and just added the skyline, page numbers and price. I changed the fonts of the sell lines so its less boring and more handwritten to imply that the magazine is more diary like so that the readrers feel comfortable to read the magazine. The us of double explaination marks connotes more excitement and shocking. I also kept the page numbers beside the sell lines and it's conventional to be small and black font. The ''OMG'' is still the same but in bold to make it more dramatic. I moved the web address to the bottom and placed the price at the left top corner because it's cheap it's big and bold to appeal the audience to buy it because conventionally the price is £2.35-2.99. If I chose the price to be £2.35 it would be near the bar code. The tag line is now bold and in a serif font to tell the audience it's a magazine but not a simple and boring magazine. The sky line is in white sroked with black to give the connotations of importance the white connotes poisitivity and good music.
I changed the splash colour to pink because then it's consistant in colour it also matches the the masthead and that's imporatnt because Pop girl is promoting a new artist. The pull quote has been changed to a handwriting format however I couldn't do it black because it doesn't stand out because her jeans are black so I needed the pull quote to be bright as possible because it's this story that's interesting the audience to buy the magazine, I chose the quote to be ''How I became a star'' because it sounds influencial. The USP is smaller but the same and placed on the left side. I could add more sell lines and feature pictures to make it look more exciting and fun.